you are living in the university residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late night. Write a letter to the governor of the university. In your letter, complain about the situation say why this is a problem and propose ways to reduce the noise

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Dear Mr Dean, I am writing regarding the amount of noise coming from the new campus canteen which has just open

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week near my residence.

Althought

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, I am pleased that we have

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facility but the

resutrant

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restaurant

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remains open up to midnight and results in loud talking, shouting and

sound

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the sound

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of loud music

conitinuing

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continuing

untill

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until

about

tweleve

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twelve

past fifteen.

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, it causes me and my neighbours in the residence a serious problem, because at that time we tried to

stuy

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stay

study

or sleep but we can not because of the

distrubance

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disturbance

coming from the cafeteria.

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is affecting our study and sleeping routine. I am sure you will appreciate that

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very

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worrying situation for us all. I would like to suggest that campus authorities restrict

resturant

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restaurant

opening to 11 pm at the latest on the weekdays, leaving it at midnight during weekends.

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, there

shloud

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should

be some signs to put up to remind users to be considerate and to keep their noise to an absolute minimum. These are simple steps

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would make us all very grateful indeed. With regards, Abeldeep Sekhon

Submitted by Abeldeep Sekhon on Sun Jun 21 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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185 words

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