Technology will eventually solve all the environmental issue. Do you agree or disagree

Technology will play significant role in addressing the environmental issues.
Now a days
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Nowadays
, most of the countries are investing in the innovation areas which will help us to preserve our natural resources. I agree that the inventions will surely benefit us to save our
environment
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environment, however
however
there is still
individual’s equal responsibility
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the individual’s equal responsibility
to save our earth. New environmentally friendly technologies have already shown great results for its ability to tackle global issues.
For
example
, the recent invention in electric vehicles made
considerable positive impact
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a considerable positive impact
on the air quality. It has been
noticeable at
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noticeable, at
least in my city. Another
example
is, we are getting good quality of water these days due to the new techniques used in water purification process. So, indeed, innovations can directly address some of the world’s most pressing environmental problems.
However
, in many areas, technologies are not developing rapidly enough to resolve critical environmental problems.
For
example
, consider the alarming number of plastic particles in
World’s oceans
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the World’s oceans
. Some technological solution to
this
problem is still in progress. In the meantime, I think it is
individual’s responsibility
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the individual’s responsibility
an individual’s responsibility
to
minimize to use
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minimize use
of plastic and save our Earth!
For
example
, people can start using reusable container or bags for food
instead
of single-use plastic bag. Changes like these must be adapted by a very large number of people because alternative solution is not yet available. In conclusion, I do agree that we will able to tackle environmental problems with the help of new inventions.
However
, people
also
must work together to address most of the serious environmental issues.
Submitted by Pooja Kulkarni on

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