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The role of ecotourism in central Asia. Explain it through examples

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Before writing about the role of
ecotourism
 in Central Asia, it is better to explain what
ecotourism
 is.
Ecotourism
 is a natural thing in our
world
. Natural places, natural landscapes, parks, oceans, mountains, forests, rivers, and more. Central Asia has a majority of natural masterpieces, especially in Uzbekistan, Tajikistan, Kyrgyzstan, Kazakhstan, and in other places. I can say that the tourism industry in the early years developed by
Ecotourism
.
For instance
, Tajikistan is famous for its the Pamir Mountains, which is
also
 called ''Bomi Dunya''- the roof of the
world
. Every year
this
place
 attracts to its beautiful mountains the majority of tourists. Being told as a pearl of Central Asia Kyrgyzstan is popular with its rivers, forests, and mountains, which attracts tourists and can help to develop an eco-tourism. Issyk-Kul is the biggest lake in the
world
 and takes
second
place
 all over the
world
. Kyrgyzstan has places like Osh, Bishkek, Kazarman, Talal, and other attractive places that caused the arrival of tourists. Uzbekistan is full of eco-
touristic
visited by throngs of tourists
touristy
 places
such
 as mountains Chimyan, mountains Ohalik, and other places that make tourists come to Central Asia. The role of
ecotourism
 in Central Asia is enormous.
This
ecotourism
 brings people from all over the
world
 because Central Asia is rich in many beautiful and scenic places. People are more familiar with
ecotourism
 than any other technology or another form of tourism because
ecotourism
 is a gift of nature and many people love natural things. There should not be anything that hinders the development of
ecotourism
 in the
first
place
,
for example
, due to a large number of tourists in some places, the whole
place
 is full of garbage and waste, which stops attracting tourists from the
next
 trip. One of the most important rules of
ecotourism
 is to preserve nature,
that is
, to preserve the animals, flowers, rocks, and so on.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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