Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The
music
is a simple language which, can anyone understand it. I mean you don not need to learn the musician’s language to understand what he plays? The
music
content from notes which have specific sounds, so it is easy to become accepted from different cultural or ages.
Also
, human used to listen to the natural
music
from animals, wind, and trees’ leaves and, so human’s ears are familiar with various kinds of sounds. The
music
notes are collections of sounds which express emotions in human in special situations. Generally, human in daily lives passes in several situations
such
as happiness, sadness, and hardness, so he or she need to share their feelings with another, or sometimes human want to release her or his negative feeling because these both reasons people choose to listen to different sounds to live the moment or change their mode. The individuals consider the
voice
one of the used ways to deal with their emotions, meaning do not make considerations to the origin of the
music
, their interest in how the sound is expressed about their times.
As a result
of previous, people might love
music
belong to other countries and old age because it extracts their emotions.
For example
, one day my Argentinean friend sent to me Spanish orchestra becoming my favourite song, during wash dishes. Human ears used to hear many types of
voice
, whether natural sounds or artificial sounds. Old human in desert, forest, and sea listened to an environment’s
voice
, and modern human has used to listen to machines’ sounds, cell phones rings, and instruments, so our ears have ability to filter all sounds and choose which make sense with the brain. On the other words, people could interest with
music
that comes from different cultural or age’s stage. One day, while I was in the mall, I watched Turkish folklore, of course, with Turkish
music
, really, I liked it. Later, I have looked Turkish customs up because their folklore pushed me to try to find their other dancing.
Finally
, I completely agree that
music
is a perfect way to short distances between cultures and ages. Especially, since people concern about their feeling and how the
music
can express about it, nor about
voice
age or background.
Also
, human’s ears could like any tone correspond their mind, that creates a chance to know a new sound and maybe a new person.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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