Children who start reading earlier in life, perform better later on in their school studies. How important are early reading skills in a child's academic performance? What other preschool factors influence a child's later academic achievements?

Children Trained trained by middle class parents have the ability to deal more with circumstances than the well off ones. If money is
everything
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everything, then
then
most of our lives will be in
chao
a state of extreme confusion and disorder
chaos
.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
strongly agreed with
this
because learning to deal with your problems without money at
early stage
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an early stage
the early stage
of your life gives you different methods to approach life matters. Training a child with less amount of money exposes them to problem solving methods, especially when adults like that are left alone in the world, catering for themselves in terms of jobs, managing their family and bringing up their own sons and daughter will not be a difficult task to them,
For instance
my uncle is always awake very early in the morning to get a green pasture for his family, when he is gone the offspring will go to the farm to get breakfast for everyone so that they will eat and keep for daddy. If an adult is trained in a wealthy home nowadays, they
are always spoil
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are always spoiling
are always spoiled
are always spoilt
have always spoiled
have always spoilt
always spoil
with bad characters and
also
slow in thinking of the
next
thing needed for them because everything comes easy to them.
often
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Often
refuses elderly advice while they are in danger
approaching their
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approaching, they
approaching they
live with soft hands.
Overpampering
leads them to
this but
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this, but
been
the state or fact of existing
being
trained in a low class or middle class home
give s
cause to have, in the abstract sense or physical sense
gives
the opportunity to be open to the world experience
also
teaches
wide range
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a wide range
of good
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
for
Suggestion
For
example one
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example, one
of the former Nigeria state
governor
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governor's
daughter
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daughters
has her collections of bags and shoes posted on the Internet which got the public talking harshly to her and the father and
also
course
give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
cause
them their
reputation s
the state of being held in high esteem and honor
reputations
in the society. In conclusion, children should always be trained in minimal ways not giving them things in excess
this
burst their psychology in good ways.
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