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Your neighbor has been making a lot of noise recently. This has been causing you problems, and you want to ask them to stop. Write a letter to your neighbor in your letter: Ask for an explanation for the noise Explain the problem this has cause to you Say what will happen if the problem is not solved.

#neighbor #noise #explanation
Dear Emily, I am writing to raise my
complaint
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the
noise
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 coming from your apartment in
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recent weeks. I would like to hear your explanation
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 is happening in your area that produces so much buzz. I am having difficulty in conversation with
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someone sitting with me, Dear Emily, I am writing to raise my objection regarding
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the turbulence
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coming from your apartment in
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recent weeks. I would like to hear your explanation
what
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 is happening in your area that produces so much
noise
. I am having difficulty in conversation with the someone sitting with me, Because of the loud sounds
that
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 so noisy.
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this
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 my entire family. Especially
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my wife
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she
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 could not sleep properly because of loud noises even late at night. My son complained that he
cannot
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 concentrate on doing his homework. Even our dog has been having unlikely behaviour that he cannot eat properly
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 causes
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him to
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 be weak. I would like you to reduce the commotion coming from your house, especially in the late midnight. If you cannot control the cry
level
, I will have no choice but I have to report and
complaint
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 to the police and city council. I believe that you will
make
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 the necessary action and that will end the issue. Regards, SamsonBecause of the loud sounds
that
is
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 so noisy.
In
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this
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causing
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having
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 a very bad effect
to
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on
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 my entire family.
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 my wife that she could not sleep properly because of
loud
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the loud
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 noises even late at night. My son complained that he
cannot
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could not
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 concentrate on doing his homework.
Although
 our dog has been having unlikely behaviour that he cannot eat properly
that
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causes
to
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him to
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 be weak. I would like you to reduce the roar coming from your house, especially in the late night. Because If you cannot control the
noise
level
, I will have no choice but I have to report and
complaint
Replace the word
complain
show examples
 to the police and city council. I believe that you will
make
Correct your spelling
take
show examples
 the necessary action and that will end the issue. I am writing to raise my protest regarding
on
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apply
show examples
the
noise
level
 coming from your apartment in
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
recent weeks. If you cannot control the
noise
level
, I will have no choice but I have to report and
complaint
Replace the word
complain
show examples
 to the police and city council. I believe that you will
make
Correct your spelling
take
show examples
 the necessary action and that will end the issue. Regards, Samson
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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