It has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication. Do the benefits of globalisation outweigh the drawbacks?

It is

undoudtedly

without doubt; certainly

undoubtedly

true that the world is constantly changing under the process of

globalisation

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gradually blurring (is it the correct verb?)

the

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boundaries between countries. While some people consider that

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will result beneficially, others argue that drawbacks would outweigh. On the one hand, there

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are

a number of possible advantages arising from

globalisation

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and foremost,

globalisation

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makes business increasingly international as a global economy means free trade between countries. It could benefit to every country because any goods would be available

everywehere

to or in any or all places

everywhere

.

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,

globalisation

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can strengthen political relationships as countries would be more dependent on each other.

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but not least, investors

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would encourage

would be encouraged

to put their money in developing countries stimulating their

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growth

amd

in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

reducing poverty.

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, it is

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possible to outline some potential negative outcomes of

globalisation

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. In spite of the fact that

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and relocating businesses

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in

less

depeloped

being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful

developed

countries at the

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sight seems certainly beneficial, it can lead to unpleasant consequences as well.

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, companies move to countries where labour is cheap and trigger overworking and even

exploition

the act of making some area of land or water more profitable or productive or useful

exploitation

of local people.

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, in developing

countris

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

countries'

counties

salaries are usually low and working conditions are often poor. The other negative outcome could be pollution as global trade creates overproduction and

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excessive wastes. In conclusion,

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there are a few disadvantages regarding

globalisation

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, there is a plethora of advantages that outweigh the negative aspects.