A local school is requesting ideas for renovations. Write to them and include Problems they have now Suggestions to change How they could make these changes

Dear Sir,

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so glad to know that the school is going through renovation. Earlier,

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I wanted to raise certain concerns regarding school infrastructure, from the kid's perspective

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but did not get a chance. But

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, the management has decided to take

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initiative and I am so thrilled to put forward my suggestions. There are certain problems which as following.

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, the location of the institution is not good. The road on which the school is located is not safe and there are so many holes. So many accidents have taken place in the past.

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, there are very limited books in the library, due

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maximum students lack study material relevant to their subjects.

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, sometimes certain topics are explained better by other authors rather than the recommended in the syllabus.

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, sports ground is not up to the mark because of which children indulge

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sports activities. Sports is quite significant to a certain extent, in

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overall development. Fourthly, they aren't any sitting arrangement in the cafeteria, Mostly, either they have to eat while standing or need to sit ground, which is quite inconvenient. But these things issues can be resolved by Yours faithfully, Shreya