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Being a celebrity-such as famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. do you think that being celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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It is always difficult to be a famous personality.
Although
, it has some benefits
too
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too, such
such
 as luxurious
life
 style, renowned
name
Suggestion
names
 in the society, protection and various benefits along with deprived of their own personal
life
 due to stalking or work stress.
Firstly
, as a reputed celebrity they enjoy all the benefits, expensive valuables a common man can just think
off
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of
 and are often recognized by the nation for the struggles and sacrifices they go through.
For example
, a footballer may enjoy valuable
items but
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items, but
 at the same time, it requires intense hard-work and dedication towards it.
Secondly
, they
are allowed
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allow
 for the easy entry to the VIP entries or are invited to big functions or parties. For relevance, a model youth icon may be under protection for 24 x 7 hours for their own safety and to keep anti-social elements away.
On the contrary
, the person may be deprived to enjoy his/ her own personal or social
life
 or may sometimes experience loss of fear of
life
 and may remain under depression.
For instance
, due to changing trends or interest, they might face hardship to maintain their status in the industry or may face stalking from their fans. To conclude,
life
 of celebrity or personality is not easy.
However
, it is up to them to enjoy the moment they live every day.
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