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Write an apology letter to your friend for not attending his birthday party

#apology #friend #birthday #party
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Dear Mark, Welcome to the
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! Heard from our mutual friends that your
b
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day
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 was out of
this
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 world
..
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 Though I had plans to surprise you, my
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last minute
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 official procedures related to my work interfered and couldn'
t
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 attend your
party
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.
Sorry
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 dude!! Forgive me for not attending your
party
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, Mark. I feel frustrated if I think of the fact that I couldn'
t
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 attend your
b
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day
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party
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. I am at
loss
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a loss
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of
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 words to express, how sorry I am !! While I had great plans to surprise you, some of my pending official activities, haunted me just before I started
to
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at
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 your
party
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. Unfortunately, I had to attend to it as it might impact my career prospects significantly. Well, I did complete the activities, at the expense of missing my best friend's
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day
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 celebration Dude, I seriously want to make
this
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 up to you
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 Why don'
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 we meet at TJ's,
the
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this
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 coming weekend? Despite the fact that we have some alone time to discuss a lot, I am sure that I wouldn'
t
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 be able to recreate the same
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 as your
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'
day
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. And, I have a special surprise for you. Yours truly, Gandhi
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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