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Some people suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this

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Most companies and government departments around the world require
experience
 before hiring people.
Therefore
,
experience
 has become something basic for everyone. But is it necessary to work and take
experience
 immediately after
school
? Personally, I believe that having
job
 after
school
 is considered as a double-edged weapon. So, in
this
 essay both the positive and negative edges are going to be discussed. One of the main benefits having
job
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a job
 after
school
is get
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gets
 an
experience
 taking japan as an example, where most of
students
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the students
there enroll
Accept comma addition
there, enrol
there enrol
 for a
job
 while they still in senior high
school
 and continue until they leave the
school
 and get
in
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into
 a university.
As a result
, Japan is distinguished by productive people around the world.
In addition
,
experience
 is an important thing that distinguishes everyone in a
job
 and it is considered an important qualification for every
job
.
However
, the people who chose to work after
school
 faced many difficulties later when they decided to complete their studies at university.
First
, staying in the profession for several years reinforces the desire to continue working
instead
 of studying and
this
 is not considered a positive thing. As young people still need to obtain more qualifications to obtain more and better opportunities.
For example
,
promotion
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a promotion
 to a
job
 is not based on
experience
only, it depends
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, it only depends
, it depends only
 on university degrees for the employee.
As a result
, people will take longer time because of
difficulties
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the difficulties
 in studying late. To sum up, I realize that human should
distinguishes
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distinguish
 between the good and
bead
that which is below standard or expectations as of ethics or decency
bad
 aspects of anything in life. In my opinion, the advantages of having
job
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a job
 after
school
 outweigh the negatives.
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