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Some people suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

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In the present age, taking a
job
 for some years between
university
 and high school is playing an increasingly important role in students ‘life. Whether, it is a blessing or a curse has sparked a lot of debate in our society. Some people agree that taking a
job
 has many advantages in our community. While, Others argue that taking a
job
 before
university
 has a lot of harm as well. In
this
 essay, I will discuss two points.   A convincing argument has been made that taking a
job
 between
university
 and high school has many advantages. To start with, the students who
work
 in a specialized
job
, they intend to
work
 in after
university
, will be more experienced at
this
 field. They will acquire more and more skills as speaking fluently and communicating with others.
In addition
 to, financial factor plays a great role. Students who
work
 gain more
money
 to live better and pay for their
study
 in
university
.
Furthermore
, taking a
job
 before
university
Suggestion
the university
 will help the students get jobs after finishing
university
 easily as they have both experience and qualifications.   Admittedly, profit driven from
work
 before
university
 has widely affected young people, especially when they end up their
study
 forever and never returning to
study
. Interims of enjoyment of
work
 life they decide to continue to
work
instead
 of boring
study
. Another disadvantage is losing of good
study
 habits and forgetting
study
 and learning.
Moreover
, they will be involved in
work field
Suggestion
the work field
 and gaining more
money
 to improve their life.
For example
, they will be able to buy whatever they need through
work
 which provided them with
money
.   In conclusion, I am convinced that human being should have their own choice, luckily, there are holidays to
work
 and gain some experience and
money
 at the same time. In my opinion, the advantages of having a
job
 far outweigh the disadvantages.
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