some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at school. to what extent do the advantages outweighs disadvantages

It is considered by some educational
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the highest ranking position for a university academic
professors
think that
students
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student
exchange to
oversea
may have some benefits for them.
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an analytic or interpretive literary composition
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will gather
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marked by complexity and richness of detail
elaborate
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thus
will from a logical
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a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
connection
. As we all know, Hong
kong
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Kong
students most busy with academic, they not only join face of a lot of test or exam, but
also
need to
participat
share in something
participate
in
wind variety
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a wind variety
of
totuies
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
duties
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.
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Therefore, Hong
Kong students do not have enough time to relax or take a break, they feel more tired, busy, and pressure of their
study
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student
life.
few
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Few
students due to academic stress suffer from depression and anxiety.
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How even
,
students
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student
exchange to
oversea
, it may reduce their pressure and enjoy
to
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studying
study
, because
most
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the most oversea school value
oversea
school value of relaxing to
study
and establish Academic is not
only method
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the only method
to success.
for
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example, students
are
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are studying
study
at least 4 hours in the morning, after lunch break, they can join different activities or outdoor activities to find their hobby or interest until the end of the daily
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plan for an activity or event
schedule
.
it
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It
is establish
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is established
establishes
relax and interesting atmosphere to encourage students does not be
afriad
filled with fear or apprehension
afraid
to
study
, which is fun. In addiction,
oversea
school may focus on more useful English and
dailylife
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daily life
English more than Academic English so that it may easy to handle and feel
satisfaction
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the satisfaction
of their
study
.
On the other hand
, students rare speck English on regularly in Hong Kong, they most reply to
speck
express in speech
speak
Cantonese as their
first
lanuage
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
so that if they need to communicate with
oversea
people, it may difficult to have a
conversetion
the use of speech for informal exchange of views or ideas or information etc.
conversation
. If students exchange to
oversea
such
as
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of or relating to or characteristic of Great Britain or its people or culture
British
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and England, it may build up students English language, because English is the
first
lanuage
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
in local,
also
the street, even menus in the restaurant is English, it can lead students read more, speck more in the
oversea
that can boost students vocabulary and fluency
to
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in
communication with each other. It can build up all aspect
skills including
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skills, including
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benefits
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educationalists
  • international exchange visits
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • outweigh
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • school
  • exposes
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • enhances
  • language skills
  • promotes
  • independence
  • self-confidence
  • builds
  • lifelong friendships
  • provides
  • unique learning experiences
  • expensive
  • homesickness
  • emotional distress
  • careful planning
  • logistical arrangements
  • disrupt
  • academic progress
  • safety
  • security risks
  • cultural appropriation
  • misunderstandings
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