Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Disscus both view and give your opinion.

In the 21st century, there are two main types of
city
:
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:
horizontal
city
with
houses close the
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houses close to the
ground and
vertical
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the vertical city
city
with multi-storey houses. While some people consider better provision of horizontal
city
is the best choice,
Iam
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
am
of opinion that
verticl
at right angles to the plane of the horizon or a base line
vertical
city
as a great solution. On the one hand
,
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,
it
is believe
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is believed
that
aliving
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a living
in horizontal is greatest
.
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.
A
conuncing
causing one to believe the truth of something
convincing
explanation is that living in
ground floor
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the ground floor
is safer. The natural disaster problems
such
as storm, earthquake
,
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,
tornado easily knock out tall
buiding
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
so people will be
proteced
kept safe or defended from danger or injury or loss
protected
.
Furthermore
,
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,
in the morning human always lack of energy so all the
activitis
any specific behavior
activities
activists
are leisurely and easy to be
late but
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late, but
horizonal
parallel to or in the plane of the horizon or a base line
horizontal
house assist people to save their time and faster escape from the house to their workplace.
On the other hand
, I pay my faith in the idea that live in vertical
city
is the best choice. The most
obivous
easily perceived by the senses or grasped by the mind
obvious
reason is that a
city
with more skyscraper will use less land.
This
scenario
enbles
render capable or able for some task
enables
the government to build facilities for citizen
such
as hospital, park, school. Another point worth mentioning is that the view from
skycraper
a very tall building with many stories
skyscraper
is an attraction that makes many people choose to live because people will see the whole
city
and feel yourself closer to the sky. In conclusion, while living
in horizontal
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the horizontal city
city
have some benefits, it seems to me that the advantages of life
in vertical
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vertical cities
city
with skyscrap
ers m
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make
akes better choice
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