Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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with or without charge is now controversial. Some people advocate the free spreading of valuable knowledge because of its benefits to individuals and society, but I hold the opinion that some vital and priceless
information
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should not be shared without any fee. On the one hand, people support the sharing of science, business and academic world – related
information
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because of some reasons.
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, as for individuals, free access to
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information
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will facilitate their work and study.
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, if a successful businessman
shares
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shared
share
experience about setting up and running
business
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a business
the business
effectively, many others can learn from it and start their own business on the right way.
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, the society has a knowledgeable workforce since knowledge is exchanged and people can access ideas that are worth sharing.
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, the programs introducing more effective and attractive teaching methods can be accessed by different teachers who
then
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apply them in their classes.
On the other hand
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, I agree with the view that the access to some crucial and valuable
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should be charged. The initial reason is that some pieces of
information
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are priceless because they are discovered after endless efforts and hard work of a person or even a team. Charging a fee can not only show the gratitude
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for
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contribution but
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contribution, but
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enhance the responsibility of users.
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, to create many online vocabulary sets which help learners remember and apply new words, a teacher works
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for hours.
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, it will be unfair if
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work is shared freely.
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, some
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is too important to be widely spread.
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, if the instruction about producing nuclear weapons is leaked, many terrorists or criminals can use it illegally. In conclusion,
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some people are in favour of sharing academic knowledge freely, I strongly believe that some
information
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should not be shared because of its importance and value.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaboration
  • accelerates progress
  • innovative discoveries
  • transparency
  • open access
  • verify results
  • fraudulent
  • ethical practices
  • consumer trust
  • potential risk
  • misuse
  • sensitive information
  • genetic data
  • defense-related technologies
  • proprietary information
  • trade secrets
  • competitive edge
  • value
  • investment of time and resources
  • compensation
  • disincentivize
  • recoup costs
  • balanced approach
  • policies and agreements
  • sensitive data
  • fair compensation
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