AMany museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, perspectives of whether museums should collect entrance fees or not are

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among people. Some people believe that museums should charge fees for their own benefits while others think that

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would cause negative impacts to museums more than positive aspects. Despite there are some drawbacks for charging people when they enter the museums, I am convinced that there are more merits than the demerits. On the one hand, it can be argued that museums will be less popular among visitors. Charging the fees for entering exhibitions will cause visitors or travellers to avoid visit the places.

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is because those travellers, especially international travellers, have limited budgets to spend while they are travelling.

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, once they learn that there are costs for visiting the places, they will choose to travel to other locations that are

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rather than coming to museums.

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, the tourist survey reveals that many museums in New York experience a dramatic drop by 70% of

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the number

of international visitors within the

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few months that they apply fees for entering

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the museum

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, most of the museums have to reopen without charging fees for visitors so they could gain

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the same number

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of visitors.

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, there are a

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of benefits associated with charging entrance fees at museums.

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, museums would have new revenues that they could pay for hiring staff and for maintenance costing. Those two expenses are high and so having a new source of income would help

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to run their normal businesses.

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,

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in Paris has normally ten millions dollar per years that they need to respond since they was established. If

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did not have fees incomes from visitors, it would experience loss and close its place.

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, implementing money charging can help museums to restrict only people, who interested to study and learn.

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will help museums to limit

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of visitors per day so that they can have only people that have good intentions to be educated visit their place. It would be easy for

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to serve only the right target customers. In conclusion, it seems to me that

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when they choose to charge visitors the entrance fees, there are more benefits that museums could receive as they could have new incomes for their expenses and have only the

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of right target visitors.