AMany museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, perspectives of whether museums should collect entrance fees or not are
varies
Suggestion
varied
among people. Some people believe that museums should charge fees for their own benefits while others think that
this
would cause negative impacts to museums more than positive aspects. Despite there are some drawbacks for charging people when they enter the museums, I am convinced that there are more merits than the demerits. On the one hand, it can be argued that museums will be less popular among visitors. Charging the fees for entering exhibitions will cause visitors or travellers to avoid visit the places.
This
is because those travellers, especially international travellers, have limited budgets to spend while they are travelling.
Therefore
, once they learn that there are costs for visiting the places, they will choose to travel to other locations that are
free
Suggestion
freer
more free
rather than coming to museums.
For instance
, the tourist survey reveals that many museums in New York experience a dramatic drop by 70% of
number
Suggestion
the number
of international visitors within the
first
few months that they apply fees for entering
museum
Suggestion
the museum
a museum
.
Consequently
, most of the museums have to reopen without charging fees for visitors so they could gain
same
Suggestion
the same number
number
of visitors.
On the other hand
, there are a
number
of benefits associated with charging entrance fees at museums.
Firstly
, museums would have new revenues that they could pay for hiring staff and for maintenance costing. Those two expenses are high and so having a new source of income would help
museum
to run their normal businesses.
For example
,
Louve
one of a set of parallel slats in a door or window to admit air and reject rain
louvre
luv
museum
in Paris has normally ten millions dollar per years that they need to respond since they was established. If
museum
did not have fees incomes from visitors, it would experience loss and close its place.
Secondly
, implementing money charging can help museums to restrict only people, who interested to study and learn.
This
will help museums to limit
number
of visitors per day so that they can have only people that have good intentions to be educated visit their place. It would be easy for
museum
to serve only the right target customers. In conclusion, it seems to me that
although
there is a negative impact of
museum
Suggestion
the museum
when they choose to charge visitors the entrance fees, there are more benefits that museums could receive as they could have new incomes for their expenses and have only the
number
of right target visitors.
Submitted by lukpearyyy on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: