Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

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There is no doubt that universities play an important role in educating society.

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, while some people do believe that educational institutions should geared exclusively towards subjects that may be of practical use in the future, I would agree with those who argue that one’s choices of degrees should lie with them.

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, it is vital that universities should equip our workforce with scientists, engineer, and other professionals that enable our society to progress.

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is because a country without

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experts is a country without the means to plan, create, maintain essential features of modern life.

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, if we did not have engineers, we would not enjoy

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public transport facilities and infrastructure as subways, trams, and bridges. The argument goes that if students are allowed to choose what they want to study,

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there will be a shortage of these important workers.

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, I believe allowing students to opt for what they want to study is the only way to acquire motivated, passionate, and

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competent professionals. The reason for

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that free choice with a sense of autonomy, and research has shown that autonomy is a necessary catalyst for drive and enthusiasm.

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results in students having the impetus to master their subject rather than merely aim for good enough.

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, if educational institutions force students into one category of study,

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the drive for mastery that would have come with pursuing their passion will disappear. In conclusion,

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it is of critical importance that universities continue to supply society the professionals in the fields of technology and science, I feel that should be the student’s choice to do so on the basis that will give them more motivation to excel in their work.

Toan Thai ThanhWed Jun 24 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?