A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Many countries around the world depend on

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development as an indispensable way to enrich their countries.

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is greatly outweigh

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the Demerits.The essay will first demonstrate that

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a crucial role in

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job opportunities followed by the destruction of many wonders and

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tourist destination. The two main benefits of

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tourist industry are

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a massive amount of occupation for the locals in order to deal with dramatic unemployment.

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, Tourists spend a lot of money on many services including transportation , hotels , restaurants

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medical services,…etc.

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contributes an extra income, greatly supporting the countries’

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, from 2012 to 2018, travel and

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no less than 7% of

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GDP to Vietnam’s

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, becoming one of the countries most reliant on travel and

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decreases the level of unemployment by offering new jobs for locals.As an illustration, the influx of tourists results in a larger demand

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restaurant workers,chiefs, tour guides, hotel

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and employees of retail services, motivating entrepreneurs to hire more collaborators for these positions

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, Travel and

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fundamental process that lead to the ruination of many wonders and popular places.The enormous number of visitors is a particular

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the environment

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numerous ancient constructions,temples,pagoda national parks and monuments…etc.

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, when places of interest are overcrowded, natural resources usually become over-exploited,

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more Son Dong which is one of the

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largest caves

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endangered by

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rare species in the cave has suffered

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humans’ over-exploration.

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, proper hospitality management and appropriate usage of

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revenue by the government can greatly help

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issue. In conclusion,

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negative effect

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environmental exploitation, it has an extremely positive influence on

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and provides a paramount number of new

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employment

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for local folks. I strongly believe that these benefits of

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is outweigh

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its’ drawbacks