Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taugh to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Mainly, parents wanted to make their children competitive than others. But, some were making their children cooperative in order to make better adults in

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essay will show both side views. Examine the former view, the foremost argument put forward by the proponents is that their children should be better in competition than another, it will affect their skills. Being a competitive can push the our inner achiever up.

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, to achieve any higher post or goal, you have to compete with others.

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, the goals can be achieved effortlessly.

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, all the fields contain many candidates, so the parents are teaching to be a competitor.

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, those who favour the latter viewpoint have their own arguments.

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with, they claim that The children should be more cooperative than competitive, because being cooperative, it will more useful in the

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of adult life.

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skill can change the thinking of the child in their adulthood.

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, many consequences occur in everybody's lives, so being a helpful to others can be beneficial to us in

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or any day. In conclusion and In my opinion, I would support the

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is because being a helpful person makes the benefit of both. And,

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and mainly in the adulthood.