Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taugh to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Mainly, parents wanted to make their children competitive than others. But, some were making their children cooperative in order to make better adults in

future

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the future

.

This

essay will show both side views. Examine the former view, the foremost argument put forward by the proponents is that their children should be better in competition than another, it will affect their skills. Being a competitive can push the our inner achiever up.

For Example

, to achieve any higher post or goal, you have to compete with others.

Thus

, by

this

, the goals can be achieved effortlessly.

Furthermore

, all the fields contain many candidates, so the parents are teaching to be a competitor.

On the contrary

, those who favour the latter viewpoint have their own arguments.

To begin

with, they claim that The children should be more cooperative than competitive, because being cooperative, it will more useful in the

future

of adult life.

This

skill can change the thinking of the child in their adulthood.

For instance

, many consequences occur in everybody's lives, so being a helpful to others can be beneficial to us in

future

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the future

or any day. In conclusion and In my opinion, I would support the

second

view.

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This

is because being a helpful person makes the benefit of both. And,

this

will affect your life in the

future

and mainly in the adulthood.