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In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effect on the society

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It is true that the aged population is gaining ground in the number of countries where longevity is lengthened greatly by dint of higher living standards, better
healthcare
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health care
 and serene life. In my view
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however
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this
 trend has both positive and negative
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outcomes
 on the society. There are
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definitely, some clear advantageous to the society as a whole due to the
graying
(biology) the process of an individual organism growing organically; a purely biological unfolding of events involved in an organism changing gradually from a simple to a more complex level
growing
greying
 population.The higher rate of old people means that people nowadays are
more healthier
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healthier
more healthy
 and productive than their past counterparts.
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there would be
more extended family which
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a more extended family, which
a more extended family which
 is
the better
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the best
 place for children to grow up.
Moreover
, the aged groups have more life experience which would be the substantial source for the younger’s against exploiting. The upcoming trend has
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however
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some undesirable consequences too.Among them the most crucial one is that supporting the retired people
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either the direct financial support
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of
 the younger relatives or through the tax and the other beneficial systems
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would be more expensive.
In other words
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youth
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the youth
 has to pay more for caring them and it results dwindling the younger generation’s disposable income.What is more
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when the state supports more significantly to the older people in terms of nursing and other aged-related facilities
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the balance of the government’s funding could be negatively influenced. To address
this
 problem
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government
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the government
 would get more money from the other taxes and by importing workers from the other countries.
This
eventually lead
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eventually leads
 to the life of the civilian become more complicated as well as deteriorating the culture of the hos country. In conclusion
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it can be retire that
this
 ever increasing phenomenon has
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indeed
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some brighter and darker side as well.
Submitted by Yihan on

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