When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people tend to aim for high salary jobs without any hesitation come from the other factors like if it is their dream

job

or not, etc. Personally, I strongly disagree with the idea that salary is concerned as the most essential factor when finding a

job

, while other factors are still equally important. On the one hand, I agree that

money

plays an important role in choosing a decent

job

.

This

allows people to pay for their life expenses

such

as housing, food, healthcare, education, water and electric bills.

In addition

, with high salaries,

this

will provide them a comfortable life and enhance their performance on their

career

.

However

, other people decide

to

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for

on

a

career

based on their passion,

such

as teachers and artists, they usually got underpaid and did not have enough

money

to cover their basic needs but they worked with pleasure and enjoyment simply because

that

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that's

the thing they passionate about.

On the other hand

, I believe that other factors are as important as what we earn in our jobs.

First

, people choose their

job

based on their abilities and advantages they have.

For instance

, a person who

recognize

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recognizes

which fields they are

major

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majoring

in and he/she will know how to develop that skill in

orther

(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed

order

to get the relevant

job

.

Second

, the atmosphere in the workplace has a

possitive

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

impact on the workers, which is extremely crucial when choosing a

job

.

Finally

, some people decide their

career

based on the passion despite the lack of

money

for some reasons.

Thus

, having a

job

they love will make a huge difference to the worker’s performance and increase their level of

hapiness

state of well-being characterized by emotions ranging from contentment to intense joy

happiness

. To conclude, while salaries certainly impact people’s choice in deciding a

career but

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career, but

I do not believe that

money

can outweighs all other motivators.