Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. Discuss

For seeking a good

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university

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education

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and

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is mandatory at the same time. But to gain

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first

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we need to find a

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and

university

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graduation will help us in finding a

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.So, I do agree with the statement that for

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the act of determining the properties of something, usually by research or calculation

finding

a good

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university

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education

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is more convenient than gaining

experience

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in the world of

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after school.

University

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education

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builds the basement of our knowledge which actually makes

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our self

compatible for attending a

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viva. The

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recruiters are going to see our

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performance

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on the contrary

rather

than asking about our

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.Because for gaining

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we need to find a

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and must spend several years here to flourish our

experience

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level. And most

importantly

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importantly, university

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education

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is more relevant to the

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sectors working procedure. And

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that's

why a student can construct himself in a better way for the jobs.

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the other hand,

experience

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is always perishable in the

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sectors. There is no doubt that an experienced person is greatly evaluated in the

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sector than an unexperienced person. Because, by the way an

experince

having experience; having knowledge or skill from observation or participation

experienced

experience

person can handle any crucial situation which we cannot prospect from an

unexperienced

lacking practical experience or training

inexperienced

experienced

one. But our

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markets

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give

more attention to those employees who has achieved his

university

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completion certificate and

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have done jobs which are related to their course subjects. The employees whom

doesnt

does not

doesn't

have any

university

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graduation certificate but have many years

work

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experience

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,

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,

usually those employees are not greatly evaluated by the employers. In conclusion, I think that

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university

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a university education

education

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is most helpful for

guranting

give surety or assume responsibility

guaranteeing

a good

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than gaining

experience

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in the world of

work

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. But the

experince

the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities

experience

experiences

experienced

will be helpful when one have

university

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completion certificate and

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work

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on his relevant sectors for many years.

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kind of

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can definitely help anyone for

guranting

give surety or assume responsibility

guaranteeing

a good

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.