You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter - Explain why you have moved - describe the new house - Invite your friend to come and visit

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Dear Greg, How are you? It’s been a long time to hear from you. I hope everything is fine at your place. I just wanted to let you that I have shifted to Brunsbury, which is 10 miles away from your

house

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. You might have

surprised

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been surprised

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why I’ve shifted here,

suddently

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suddenly

? Actually, as you know I am working as a freelancer

since

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for

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last

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the last

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five years for Brunsbury based

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apply

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IT company, they’ve asked me to join their in-

house

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team three months ago and offered me a great package with a new

house

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. I couldn’t say no to them and moved here. The community seems awesome to me and the

house

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too. I’ve never planned for

such

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a big

bunglow

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bungalow

as it was not my budget though I’ve got the jackpot from the company.

This

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house

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has four

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bedrooms

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bed rooms

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bedrooms

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, one living room and four bathrooms. All of our family members are very happy with

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specious

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spacious

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house

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, particularly my kids, as they’ve got their own

separeted

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separate

separated

rooms.

Beside

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this

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, it has a huge garden in the backyard where we can plan the barbeque party. What is more! we’ve planned for a small party

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apply

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sunday

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Sunday

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to celebrate our new home why don’t you join us? Please bring your kids and wife along with you. They will enjoy

here

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it here

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too. Waiting for

quick

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a quick

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reply so I can arrange enough drink and food for us. Yours lovingly, Ishan

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

237 words

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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter - Explain why you have moved - describe the new house - Invite your friend to come and visit

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be diverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweighs the disadvantage.

In some countries, it is illegal for componies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?

Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter describe the situation explain the problems it is causing you offer at least one solution

Computers these days can translate all kinds of language with great accuracy. Hence, our children will not need to learn more languages in the future. Do you agree or disagree?