You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter - Explain why you have moved - describe the new house - Invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Greg, How are you? It’s been a long time to hear from you. I hope everything is fine at your place. I just wanted to let you that I have shifted to Brunsbury, which is 10 miles away from your
house
. You might have
surprised
Add a missing verb
been surprised
show examples
why I’ve shifted here,
suddently
Correct your spelling
suddenly
? Actually, as you know I am working as a freelancer
since
Change preposition
for
show examples
last
Correct article usage
the last
show examples
five years for Brunsbury based
an
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
IT company, they’ve asked me to join their in-
house
team three months ago and offered me a great package with a new
house
. I couldn’t say no to them and moved here. The community seems awesome to me and the
house
too. I’ve never planned for
such
a big
bunglow
Correct your spelling
bungalow
as it was not my budget though I’ve got the jackpot from the company.
This
house
has four
Correct your spelling
bedrooms
show examples
bed rooms
Correct your spelling
bedrooms
show examples
, one living room and four bathrooms. All of our family members are very happy with
this
specious
Correct your spelling
spacious
show examples
house
, particularly my kids, as they’ve got their own
separeted
Correct your spelling
separate
separated
rooms.
Beside
Replace the word
Besides
show examples
this
, it has a huge garden in the backyard where we can plan the barbeque party. What is more! we’ve planned for a small party
on
Change preposition
apply
show examples
next
sunday
Change the capitalization
Sunday
show examples
to celebrate our new home why don’t you join us? Please bring your kids and wife along with you. They will enjoy
here
Correct pronoun usage
it here
show examples
too. Waiting for
quick
Correct article usage
a quick
show examples
reply so I can arrange enough drink and food for us. Yours lovingly, Ishan
Submitted by Ishaan433 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: