An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

Striving for a better life is the ambition of every human being, and is one of the main reasons of immigration of professionals
to
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with
a better and prosperous place from its own native under-developed country.
This
,
nonetheless
has created many problems,
such
as
economical imbalance
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an economical imbalance
in the world and enhanced professional incompetency in the poor countries.
However
, these problems can still be prevented from prevailing
further
by providing better lifestyle and amenities to these professional experts in their native state. Shifting of cultured, learned professionals to already developed and progressed countries have moved all the knowledge, experimentation and professionalism, and
consequently
all the trade and business to that part of the world, leaving a void in the rest.
As a result
, rich, developed countries are becoming more advanced and established, worsening the situation of the poorer countries
by
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with
every passing day.
For instance
, every doctor wish to get settled in western regions of the world,
hence
eastern countries` citizens have to look upon these countries for their treatments.
Furthermore all
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Furthermore, all
the pharmaceutical companies have
thus
shifted to these areas, to get benefit from these professionals,
thus
boosting the economy of the region.
In addition
to the physical loss of professionals, poor countries
also
bear
monetary loss
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the monetary loss
in the form of financial investment, they have done
on
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for
their students. A country invests on its citizens, by teaching them, building and maintaining schools and universities, and providing them the world-class curriculum and teachers with the expectation of getting a highly-talented proficient in return but all the benefit is profited by other developed countries.
For instance
, countries like Pakistan, India give fully-funded scholarships to their highly-talented students,
however
these students, after finishing their studies, settle abroad to enjoy a comfortable living. Feeling of patriotism and a passion to work for compatriots seems vague when professionals
are offered
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offer
expensive packages for their services in developed countries.
Therefore
, offering high level incentives and remunerations to the professionals will only prevent them to move to an alien state. Every professional should be given
utmost respect
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the utmost respect
and due credit for his work and
furthermore
, should
also
be provided with world-class facilities for himself and his family.
This
seems to be the only solution to refrain skilful immigrants to leave their native country.
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