Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas. Others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People’s opinions differ as to whether or not houses in an area should be constructed in the same
style
. While there are several explanations for
this
idea, I am personally of the belief that people are free to make their own decisions on architectural styles of their houses. Apparently, there are some justifications for people to argue that all new houses in a particular area should follow the same old
style
.
First
,
this
practice could be considered as an effective method to preserve cultural identity in architecture. Due to the increase in urbanization and cultural exchange these days, exotic and modern designs imported from foreign countries have gained in popularity, making traditional structures and cultural values fall into oblivion.
Second
, if local houses share a common
style
of classical architecture,
this
area will be more likely to become a tourist attraction and attract an influx of visitors, offering considerable benefits to the local residents. In fact, an array of old quarters in the world with distinctive architectures since time memorial
have been embellished
Suggestion
has been embellished
to serve tourism purposes which contributes to not only the national tourism sector but cultural preservation. In spite of the above arguments, I strongly support the view that people should be given freedom of choice to build their own houses. Since the
style
of accommodation obviously depends on individual preference and many do not prefer vintage or ancient architectures, it would be unfair and irrational to force them to design their own houses with the old styles.
Moreover
, city
dwellers these
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dwellers, these
days, particularly
young
Suggestion
the younger
generation, tend to follow modern housing styles which are able to ensure their ultimate comfort and convenience, whereas the traditional building designs may no longer meet
such
demands.
In addition
,
house owners’ financial ability
Suggestion
the house owners’ financial ability
is
also
a key factor leading to their decision on house design and construction. It is obvious that a
modern simple
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modern, simple
house would cost relatively cheaper than the one with complicated architectural details in the past. In conclusion,
although
some advantages of following the building
style
of old houses could be identified, I believe that people should be allowed to decide the way their own houses will be built.
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