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The graph demonstrates the amounts of
usage
in millions of cubic meters by unit from seven types of industries in some countries around the world. Overall, the chemical
industry
is the highest consumer of the
water
from the public either from public supply or
groundwater
, while the machinery
industry
takes part as the lowest consumer to the
groundwater
.
Also
, the fuel and textile sector contributed the lowest on the
usage
of public supply
water
sources. The highest consumer of the
groundwater
and public supply
water
source
is the chemical industries which is 430 and 240
million
cubic meters. In comparison, the fuel and textile industries are the lowest users of the public supply
water
source
which only 10
million
cubic meters
usage
annually and the rate of
groundwater
capacity is higher which are 70 and 80
million
cubic meters.
On the other hand
, the Machinery
industry
annual
usage
of
groundwater
source
is 10
million
cubic meters, which are the lowest of all industries that used
groundwater
while the
usage
from the public supply is 100
million
cubic meters. Turning to, the paper, metal and food, drinks
industry
are consumed the
water
from
groundwater
Suggestion
a groundwater source
groundwater sources
the groundwater source
source
in 190, 110 and 240
million
meters cubic, respectively.
Also
, the annual
water
usage
from public supply for the three industries that mentioned before are 20, 50 and 190
million
meters cubic.
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