IELTS Letter Writing / GT Writing Task 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
Greetings,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health, I am writing to you concerning a training course I am interested to have in the Nile Academy next month.
First of all, I would like to inform you that this
is an advanced accounting course which has numerous real practising such
as working on latest
accounting software, Correct article usage
the latest
preparaing
sophisticated Correct your spelling
preparing
analysis
, Fix the agreement mistake
analyses
moreover
, presenting the monthly reports in well-prepared schedules.
I would like to request a paid leave for two weeks, therefore
I will have enough time for preparation and studying, if you accepte
my request, I will be so grateful.
Correct your spelling
accept
accepted
Additionally
, it is worth to mention
that Change the verb form
mentioning
this
course will be beneficial for our work as the practical application of this
accounting policy will enhance the performance of accounting
Correct article usage
the accounting
departement
, Correct your spelling
department
furthermore
, using the updated system will lead to successful results.
I am waiting for your kind reply
Yours faithfully,
Omar Kareem.Submitted by abdoo.magicoo on
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Structure
To enhance clarity, consider outlining your main points in the first paragraph to guide the reader through your letter.
Accuracy
Ensure spelling and grammar are double-checked to maintain a professional tone throughout the letter (e.g., 'prepare' instead of 'preparaing', 'accepted' instead of 'accepte').
Detail
When requesting support or proposing how the company can help, consider providing explicit details about the implications (e.g., covering course fees, specific dates for the leave).
Flow
To improve coherence, you could use more transitional phrases to link ideas smoothly between paragraphs.
Task Achievement
Your letter effectively addresses all three points from the task with relevant detail.
Format
The overall structure of your letter, including the greeting and sign-off, is appropriate for a formal letter.
Relevance
You have clearly explained how the training course will benefit your job and indirectly, the company, which shows good task understanding.