Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?
In recent years, the question of whether the environment has an impact on human characteristics or not, raising many public controversies.
Although
many people will have different characteristics, the experiences that we gain in our life still influence them.
The environment that we live in indeed has an essential part. Linking Words
First
, the place we live in shapes who we are and how we behave. Linking Words
For example
, the child with many siblings tends to be more outgoing while the only child tends to be selfish. Linking Words
Second
, parenting - perhaps not surprisingly - played a role and affected how kids develop over time. Linking Words
For example
, children with a good education tend to be good and successful people than Linking Words
ones
who do not have enough conditions.
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the ones
Nevertheless
, there are many pieces of evidence which prove that human personalities are distinct. Linking Words
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, the people who live together still maintain individual core values in integration. Saying that two children are living with a drunk father, one saw that and tried to study to be better; others become addicted to alcohol. Linking Words
Second
, we are born with unalike personalities. Some are extrovert, likely to go out and talk with friends; others are introvert, likely to stay at home, read a book and listen to music.
In conclusion, whether or not our built surroundings can affect core personality variables is still an open question. Regardless of the answer, we only live once, so be the best version of you.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...