In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology(IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, future developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive. To what extent do you agree with this view

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two decades, the world has immersed a tremendous innovations in information and technology. People have encountered life style enhancement by

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development. Obviously,

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progress has been beneficial for humankind. Personally, I attest that there are more benefits that can be acquired in

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if it is utilized appropriately. To commence with,

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has been essential in the modern time, because

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enables a person in assisting their daily living hastily.

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, in the past, newspapers and books are commonly used to gather a current information,

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IT showed a significant growth that makes things easier and convenient.

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, world wide web facilitates in spreading of news universally.

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, the current pandemic outbreak, it gives people a more knowledge about virus and assist them how they probably prevent the spread of it.

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, it helps bring people together despite country's bounds and scope.

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as a way of communication which demolish the gap of communication's distance easily and hastily.

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, social media, emails, online meeting application is the evidences that people utilize to connect to other people distantly.

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, since the

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succoured territorial gap, any citizen can simply spread their movement in the global nation.

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brings negative influences toward human behaviour,

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as consumerism and unmannered behaviour. Consumerism,

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, is caused by the tremendous growth of e-business, online advertising and

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connectivity. Evidence for

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is to provide easy transactions. Obviously, most of the people these days prefer to purchase their needs online rather than exerting efforts to go a nearest local retail shop.

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situation, especially

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availability, which intensify the extensive usage of mobile gadgets, had induced an inhumanely and sedentary behaviour among

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user. A good illustration of

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is that people tend to be less active and introvert at the same because they can conveniently do varieties of activities with

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a detrimental effect to the younger generation these days,

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, lack of supervision could lead to accessing sites that are inappropriate for their age which can thereby affect their attitudes and well being. In conclusion,

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Information Technology, particularly

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, has several negative impacts, in my opinion, it has more advantages to offer to our future generations,

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needs intensive supervision to promote usage balance.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

396 words

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World Wide Web
electronic communication
advancement
privacy breach
cybersecurity
automation
AI (Artificial Intelligence)
job displacement
electronic waste
sustainability
connectivity
efficiency
innovation
global economy
over-reliance
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In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology(IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, future developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive. To what extent do you agree with this view

Include an introduction and conclusion

More and more women are now going out to work and some women are now the major salary earner in the family. What are the causes of this, and what effect is this having on families and society?

Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet?

To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it's important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history?