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Some people believe that it is ok to put the needs of humans over environmental concerns. While others feel that protecting the environment should be prioritized. Discuss both views and what is your opinion?

#people #ok #humans #concerns #environment
Some people argue that human need should be prioritized
instead
protecing
shielding (or designed to shield) against harm or discomfort
protecting
environment whereas
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environment, whereas
 some people not agree with
this
 point of view
.
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 In my opinion,
fulfillment
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the fulfilment
fulfilment
 of human need is
also
essential but
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essential, but
 environmental protection should be
first priority
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the first priority
 of every individual
.
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Firstly
,
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as we know demands of people gradually increased day by day. As Its the right of every human to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their
demand but
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demand, but
demands but
demands demands but
 if it
harm
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harms
 the
environment
then
one
 should needs think twice.
For instance
, if
group
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a group
 of people
want
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wants
 to open new factory for
this
 they need free place it automatically lead to
deforestation which
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deforestation, which
 directly harm the
environment
,
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,
within it, smog from
factory
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the factory
factories
also
 pollute the air. In
this
 case
one
 can start the business which doesn't affect the
environment
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environment, for
for
example
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example, one
one
 can open cloth showroom
instead
 of
factory
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a factory
factories
.
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In addition
 to it
,
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,
many
businessesman
the body of individuals who manage businesses
businessmen
 seek for making more money
,
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,
bulid
make by combining materials and parts
build
appartements
a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house
apartments
apartment
instead
 afforestation, and rent it out which leads to air population.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
,
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,
cutting of forest
cause
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causes
 global warming as well as it
also cause
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also causes
 flooding because there is nothing to soak up water so these
thing
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things
 not only effect the
environment
 but
also
 create problems for human life
.
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.
 To sum up
,
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,
 we all know that fresh water and air is very essential for healthy
life it
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life, it
 should only be
obtain
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obtained
 if we all make environmental protection our
first
 priority. We all need to limits our desires which leads to harm the
environment
.
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As there is
one
 said"earth is our
mothet
a woman who has given birth to a child (also used as a term of address to your mother)
mother
"so we all need to take care of our mother.
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