The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assessment over the school year. What do you think of this trend ?

Education is the best way to build a generation competent for the future. There are a lot of methodologies through which we can evaluate the outcome of
students
.
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several decades traditional
exams
have been used to assess the performance of the
students
. But recently education system
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moving towards continuous
assessment
to measure the results of
students
. Here
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will give my explanation.
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always necessary to examine a
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performance so that they
could
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involve themselves with
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their studies
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.
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assessment
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a lot of advantages.
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with
this
process, one
student
can
continously
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continuously
measures
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his weakness. In which specific subject
he\she
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she
is not good enough can
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out through
this
process.
Besides
teachers can
also
overlook the outcomes of their
students
and by
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they can realize the weak
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of their
students
. So, They can imply more
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on their
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weak
point
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so that they can improve their definite
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point
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.
For instance
, If one
student
is not good enough in physics. Through
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continuous
exams
or
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assignments
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assignment
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he\she
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she
can figure out his weak zones and could put more
efforts
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to overcome
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into overcoming
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his lackings.
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, a teacher can
also
know the deficit of
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his
student
and can assist
him\her
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him
to surpass his lackings.
Moreover
,
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continuous
assessment
has some disadvantages
also
.
For instance
, The most commonly used
methods
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method
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to perform
continous
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continuous
assessment
is through taking assignments from
students
. But in
this
case, The
students
can copy these assignments from online
resources
because there are a lot of
recources
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resources
available
in
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online
platform
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platforms
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from where they can easily get access to those
resources
.
On the other hand
, Traditional
exams
have many advantages
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also
.
Traditional
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exam
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exams
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usually
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are usually
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held
after
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several months later from the beginning of
semisters
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semesters
semester
. So, the
students
can prepare
them
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themselves well
adequate
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adequately
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for the
exams
. In that
case
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they get enough time to remove their lackings in their courses.
Besides
, traditional
exams
usually
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are usually
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held within a strict environment where
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there is
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no opportunity to pass
in
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the exam by copying from other
students
and even no scope for using online
resources
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also
. In
this
regards
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regard
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, the
assessment
process is more transparent than
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continuous
assessment
. In conclusion, I want to say that
continous
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continuous
assessment
is the best way for examining or evaluating a
student
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performance.
But
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the procedure for
this
assessment
should be transparent and drastic so that the
students
can not pass those
exams
by copying from other
resources
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • current trend
  • traditional exams
  • continuous assessment
  • school year
  • deeper understanding
  • ongoing feedback
  • improvement
  • pressure
  • stress
  • real-life situations
  • continuous learning
  • evaluation
  • abilities
  • progress
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