Buying things on the internet such as books, air tickets, groceries are becoming now more and more popular, do the advantages of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Shopping is an essential activity that literally everybody participates in at one or more point or the other in their lives. Buying things on the
internet
on the other hand
, is an activity of choice and people do it for various reasons, ranging from buying personal or work items, to gifts for other people all of which are important. How often people do
this
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this, although
although
, can depend on
preferability
the quality of affording gain or benefit or profit
profitability
, how much
time
they have among so many other things. In
this
essay I'll be examining both the advantages and disadvantages of buying things on the
internet
and at the end I'll explain why I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. A number of things can be considered advantages of shopping via the
internet
, people, especially youths buy things on the
internet
because of comfortability, you can get anything you want
at
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on
your doorstep without breaking a sweat, literally. Another advantage is that the gap between available products and buyers that need them is getting slimmer, it is easier to look for and actually find the particular item you want to purchase, on your phone or laptop, than it is moving from stall to stall.
Also
, it is
time
conserving, you can spend the
time
you would have used to go buying things physically at malls to get other things like reading, working
etc
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its
done.
This
method of shopping
also
has
it's
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its
disadvantages, as expected. One of which
are
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is
dishonesty of online vendors and their team about issues like money, estimated delivery
time
and so on. There is
also
the chance of discrepancies between the item you ordered for, and the item you get at the end of the day. A lot of people in my generation, myself included, don't like stress, so you'd find them opting for the easiest method to get things done, shopping included. And there are ways to reduce those disadvantages to a minimum, you could ask for reviews about a particular vendor online before patronising them, especially if you're doing it for the
first
time
. You can stick to the tested and trusted vendors you know. All these measures can guarantee smooth online shopping experience, to an extent. And
this
is why I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, a lot of the
time
. Conclusively, like I said in the beginning, shopping via the
internet
still remains a choice and not absolutely
every thing
all things
everything
you need will be available online, that could be because a lot of sellers are not keeping up with advancing technology, so there are times that you would still have to get the things you need physically.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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