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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs ( for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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The view about including obligatory
community
 services in high
school
 programs is disputable. Activities like cleaning and improving
school
 venues or nearby places
,
Accept space
,
 supervising youngsters in different spheres of education can be very beneficial on condition that there is no excessive pressure on pupils. That
community
services
Suggestion
service
 as unpaid
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
 is very useful for
younger generation
Suggestion
the younger generation
a younger generation
 in terms of developing the senses of belonging to the society and team working skills is obvious. Children may benefit from feeling equal while doing service work as well as realizing the importance and value of
this
 activity in improving
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
neighbourhoods
. As an example
,
Accept space
,
 in Japanese schools there
is
Suggestion
are
 no cleaning services from outside, where pupils and
school
 staff organize regular cleaning days weekly,
thus
 teaching youngsters to respect and appreciate the
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
 of service workers.
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
 if
community
 work includes activities like teaching, it will be crucial for providing teenagers with leadership and supervising experience are considered to be vital for their future career.
On the other hand
,
school
 administrations are expected to be very reasonable with the amount and time of
this
denotes a person or thing
this
this
 kind of activities as excessive work load may be disruptive for education which is the primary aim of schools. Teenagers should be instructed and lead in a very delicate manner in order to avoid rebellious
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 among them. An experience of attracting
school
 children to cotton picking companies has had its long term negative consequences connected with health and education. Fortunately, existing government has put an end to the exploitation of child
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
whish
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
 was done as so called “
community
 service”. To sum up, engaging in
community
 services is beneficial in many ways for high
school
 attendees, when it is organized and managed in
such
 a way that there is no objections and pupils do it willingly
,
Accept space
,
 understanding the necessity and value of their contribution to society.
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