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with the scale of globalisation today , it would be of unquestioned benefit to have a single world currency ? To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Except
 in
few cases
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a few cases
,
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,
 I largely agree with the notion that unified monetary
policy
 would lead to inevitable benefit to the worldwide scale because it would balance trade costs and eliminate of
currency
exchange
 fees. Universal
currency
 will increase the trade between countries and reduce the
currency
 risk from the global market.
For instance
,
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,
it
it is
it's
 become easier for
individual
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individuals
an individual
the individual
 to trade without having to worry about
exchange
 rates even it would benefit to
ordinary citizen
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ordinary citizens
the ordinary citizen
 who plan expend their business in abroad
.
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.
Thus
,
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,
through the help of common
currency
 world economics will grow.
Further
 elaborating
,
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,
 Different
currencies create
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currencies, create
 a lot of inconvenience and barriers because exchanging one
currency
 to another always involve
currency
exchange
 fees
.
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.
For example
,
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,
 banks who provide
currency
 exchanges charge high amount for
such
 service
.
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.
By eliminating the
currency
exchange
 rate the monetary union may save resources.
Although
, it
also stimulate
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also stimulates
has also stimulated
is also stimulating
 the
currency
 risk
.
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.
Thus it
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Thus, it
represent
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represents
 the unity around the
global
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globe
. Turning to disadvantage of
single
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a single currency
currency
 that the most negative side of
this
countries
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country
 will lose the ability to control their financial
policy
.
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.
 Today every nation is determine their monetary
policy
 in order to have an influence on the economy. To conclude, it can be said
that unified
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that, unified
 monetary
policy
 has more benefit than
drawback
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a drawback
drawbacks
.
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