Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

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In the
last
120 years, around the
world there
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world, there
has been a frequent migration of youth from the countryside to cities and towns, leaving behind their elderly in their hometown. The main problem
this
causes is a disappearing of entire localities from the map of countries and the most viable solution is a developing a competent immigration policy in
such
regions. The potential problem associated with relocation by recent graduates from villages to cities with developed infrastructure is the closure of businesses and the extinction of the settlements. Since having received a diploma from a good educational institution, it will not be difficult for a young specialist to find a job in the city, after that he will move his relatives
to
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in
this
city for a more comfortable inhabitation. As the decrease in residents causes a chain-reaction in neighbours who do not like to live alone, thereby leading to the depletion of human resources in the locality. The result of
this
is people leave their homes without finding those who want to buy and develop them. According to the latest UN report about the state of the world's cities, most of the cities, that will disappear, is located in Eastern Europe, and
fast
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fastest
-growing cities are located in China. To tackle
this
problem the local government should launch a well-built migration policy to create provincial immigration programs in low-populated areas in order to attract residents from near territories or other countries.
This
program will allow newcomers not only to settle in the new territory, but will
also
become an impetus in the development of sparsely populated territory.
For example
, a similar initiative in Canadian provinces leads to an increase of 8% in the population of sparsely populated areas annually. In conclusion, the preservation of the population in small towns is a major issue that can result in their disappearing,
however
, it can be addressed through the creation of provincial immigration programs for immigrants.
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