Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

People have different views about how promotions can affect to
customers
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customers'
customer's
customer
decisions and increase sales. While some people argue that the frequent appearance of advertisements makes people feel dull and prevent the growth of income, I believe that customers can easily
being
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be
been
convinced to purchase products by advertising and promotion. There are some reasons why people occur not to take notice of advertising as they used to because it causes dullness to people.
Firstly
, people tend to feel bored and unfocused if something is too familiar to them like watching a movie for a hundred times or reading a thousand similar books. Nowadays, there are various advertisements show up on the media, but most of them have the same concept or they usually appear within a set time frame.
Secondly
, people found it galling as it
spoil
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spoils
the flow when they are watching movies.
Therefore
, they decided to give none of their business to those promotions. In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that advertising is the utmost success in approaching consumers. With eye-catching models, products and the wise use of social media, it is easier for brands to attract customers to their business.
For example
, like
Iphone
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iPhone
IPhone
phone
with its modern design and many excellent functions, it
has completely drew
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has completely drawn
attention from consumers. An intelligent advertising
champaign
a race between candidates for elective office
campaign
has made
Iphone
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iPhone
IPhone
became a worldwide product, which makes Apple become a company that experienced an all-time company record for both net income and revenue, at $91.8 billion and $22.2
billion respectively
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billion, respectively
.
Furthermore
, many forms of advertising
such
as social media, newspapers or videos give customers a lot of impressions and curiosity to purchase products by showing them unique things like a new song, dance or 3D technology.
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The shop
Shop
Shape
Sharpie
is a typical example
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of
this
thesis. In conclusion, advertising certainly has its handicapped, but I believe that it is an instrumental element in purchase and sale.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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