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University education should be free for all students.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Post secondary
education
 has become a great challenge to most parents for their children's as its fee structure has increased enormously over the span of 20 years.These people demand that post secondary
education
 should be free of cost.
This
 essay will argue why castles
education
 can be a major drawback for the students as well as for the country's economy. Free university
education
 can be a huge relief for most middle class families. As they spend up to 50-55% of their earnings on educating their child.Students from every corner of the world will be accessible to
education
 and get a chance to fulfil their dream.Students coming from lower income families usually don't get accepted to big universities as they are unable to meet the university's requirement.
Hence
, they are left behind and the wealthy ones proceed. With that being said, castles
education
 has some major drawbacks as the youth will take
education
 for granted.There will be quantity of student, but fewer quality students.
In addition
, universities will be overcrowded,
hence
, will be unable to deliver quality
education
.
This
 will lead to a vast number of degree holders which will make it difficult for companies and industries to pick candidates for service.Overall,
this
 will be crucial for countries' development and will
also
 lead to the economic downfall.
This
 essay has argued people who are in favour of free
education
 have a flawed understanding of the word '
education
'.In my opinion, universities should have more scholarships for the students who truly deserve it.
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