Reading books develops more imagination and language skills compared to watching tv.

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that reading books develop more imagination and language skills.The
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thing is that we can have
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a choice
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Also we
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have different things to read depending upon us what to read
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as general knowledge
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comic
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history
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etc
continuing in the same way
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.By reading books we can increase our vocabulary
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our focus
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knowledge
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peace of
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mind, moreover
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it
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brings positivity
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leadership skills in us by reading books of great leaders
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as APJ Abdul Kalam
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Mahatma Gandhi
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continuing in the same way
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a lot
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these great personalities. I think we can learn more from books compared to TV because by reading we can learn and improve our language skills.As by reading we can increase our
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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