Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

When it comes to cultivating children, parents often face a dilemma either if they should bring them up in the home environment and by family members, like grandparents, or by the aid

recieved

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received

form

a giver or sender

from

a

childcare

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system.

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essay takes a look at both options and explains why in my

perspective raising

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perspective, raising

a

child

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in a public place brings more advantages for the

child

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. On the one hand, there are few benefits

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of

bringing up a

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by family members. The most significant one is the fact that with taking care of children by their own family, the values and morals of family can be directly transferred to them.

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, the

decipline

a branch of knowledge

discipline

that is

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more important by parents would be taught to their youngsters by a family member who has already known it.

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, in some

families

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family's

families'

family

religion is an important factor. There will be a higher chance for

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family if its members

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as grandparents instill these

spirtual

concerned with sacred matters or religion or the church

spiritual

values in their

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child

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children

compared to

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centres.

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, in my opinion raising a

child

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in a public training

facilities

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facility

is more beneficial because of three different reasons.

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, by sending younger generation to these centres they would socialize with other youngsters,

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their social skills could be improved significantly.

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, not only does

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childcare system

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the childcare system

allocates more time to teach children, but it

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also provide

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also provides

a better care and more appropriate ways of education by professional trainers and teachers.

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but not least, cultivation by families are not possible for each and every single

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, as there are families with working parents which lacking from any

assisstance

the activity of contributing to the fulfillment of a need or furtherance of an effort or purpose

assistance

from grandparents. The only option for

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families are sending their children to

childcare

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centres. To conclude, even though transferring values and ideas of a family is more achievable with rasing a

child

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by family members, I believe that due to inability of parents to allocate time for their children and on the grounds that a professional centre will train a

child

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better, it is adviseable to pass the cultivation responsibilites to

childcare

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facilities.