Recent surveys show increased interest in relocation and travel to other countries. What may be the reasons for this trend, and what will be the possible outcome from this behavior? Provide examples for your opinion.

These days
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it seems more and more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In fact
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they decide to move to new places for a vast array of reasons. My belief is that there are some fundamental factors behind
this
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Moreover
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definitely these
relocatings
become established in a new location
relocating
have
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has
unavoidable effects
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in an eclectic range from positive to negative. In
this
essay we will discuss the reasons and
also
address some examples.
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in my point of view
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it’s better to argue about factors which persuade people to travel. I believe that
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unquestionably
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the most obvious reason
reffers
make reference to
refers
to
economical
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economic
situations. Money plays a critical role in our life.
Besides
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when it seems that there are a sense of financial insecurity
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we would check some possible plans in
orther
(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed
order
others
to achieve a better life quality and safe future for our families. A
further
likely explanation that
intestifys
tendency to
migration
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migrate
is about advertisement.
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Nowadays
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we
witness
nomerous
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
deceptive commercials in relation to travel to other
countries some
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countries, some
of which motivate people to migrate. For
instanse
an occurrence of something
instance
instances
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some encouraging services and conditions
such
as residence in a nice neighbourhood located in a modern area or suggesting a host of distinctive job opportunities or
guranteeing
give surety or assume responsibility
guaranteeing
guaranteed
guarantees
a safe job condition with insurance and so on. Well
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undoubtedly
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we
witness
a genuine incremental tendency to relocation.
Secondly
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my impression is that
increasing tendency
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the increasing tendency
to migration contains both advantages and disadvantages. Well
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it’s universally accepted it has a
larg
above average in size or number or quantity or magnitude or extent
large
number of
merrits
be worthy or deserving
merits
. But
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I would guess that the most outstanding one is economic prosperity and creating job opportunities.
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every passenger or immigrant
brings
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bring
currency with him to destination country and following that
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the number of jobless people automatically will decline and we will
witness
an acute rise in terms of producing.
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Nonetheless
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it
also
has a number of shortcomings. It’s widely believed that the main negative aspect might be related to cultural issues. It’s vitally important that newcomers observe the laws of their
adapted
acquired as your own by free choice
adopted
country for the social order. Imagine the chaos that would happen if people refused to drive on the same side of the road. Two
further
instances of practices which are permitted in some
countries but
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countries, but
prohibited in others
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are the possession of firearms and gambling. By way of conclusion
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the likely reasons that lead to migration
reffers
make reference to
refers
mostly to
economical
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economic
situations
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specifically in
third
-world countries.
Moreover
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undoudtedly
without doubt; certainly
undoubtedly
advertisement serves a critical role to tempt people to travel to other countries.
Also
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we can say that there are some pros and cons. As pleasant ones
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we can point bringing currency into the country and
economical
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economic
boom
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and to
ment
(often followed by 'of') a large number or amount or extent
mint
mend
mount
aggravations we might
witness
some chaos in a society because of
cultral
of or relating to the arts and manners that a group favors
cultural
and national distinctions in customs and traditions.
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