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Due to success of convenience food and ready-made meals, we are failing to pass on adequate culinary skills to the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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ease
Suggestion
Ease
food
 and ready – made meals are highly popular at present. Success on convenience
food
 and ready-made meals made us fail to move on the essential culinary skills to the
next
generation
.
This
 essay argues why teaching about adequate culinary skills to the
next
generation
 failed and contribution of convenience
food
 ready made meals to it. In todays world, everyone lives a fast moving life.
Firstly
, Working long hours are something normal in
this
 present
generation
 and it is one factor that influences cooking cuisine in
kitchen
Suggestion
the kitchen
.
For instance
 amenity meal and ready-made meals occupies a great space. It results in lack of cooking as well. For these reasons, cooking
food
 at home is literally reduced and
that is
 why adequate culinary skills were not taken to the
next
generation
.
Secondly
, convenience
food
 and the ready –made meals are admired by people just because of its less time consuming in cooking, the good taste and its long expiry period.Convenience
food
 made every aspect of cooking easier.
For example
, in my family, my mother works as a teacher. She is always busy with handling house activities and makes herself ready for the
next
 classroom session as well. So most of the days cooking becomes a challenging part of her and
she
of a female
her
 struggles badly.
This
 is the point where all our family members enjoy in experiencing the success of facility
food
 and ready-made meal. Despite the fact of using advantage
food
 in our family
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 am educated on how to cook
food
 with essential culinary skills
by
Suggestion
from
 my mother.
This
 essay argued about the influence of comfort
food
 to fail on to take the culinary skills to the
next
generation
. In my opinion, It is important to teach the culinary skills to the
next
generation
 and to avoid easy
food
 as much as possible for a healthy future.
Submitted by rachel on

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