You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Kunal Talreja, residing in London. As you know, summer vacations are drawing closer and I am planning to spend those two months helping and contributing to society. I am writing

this

letter to express my desire to volunteer as an

English

teacher in one of the developing countries. Let me give you brief details about my skills and experience. I am holding a bachelor's degree in

English

literature and currently pursuing my master's in

English

and I have been working as an

English

teacher at a public school for eight years.

Last

year I volunteered to teach

English

in one of the remote villages in Thailand. After seeing your advertisement, I searched online about your programs and I would like to volunteer in any of the African countries. Let me know if there are any opportunities available. If

that is

not possible, I am willing to go to any other country. I am available from the start of May until the end of June. Thank you for your time and consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Kunal

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