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Technology has caused the death of traditional skills and ways of life. It is pointless to ensure their survival. Do you agree or disagree?

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The chart illustrates the survey results of the
city
resident
 in buying and consuming
coffee
 and
tea
 in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. Overall, the residents who bought fresh
coffee
 in the
last
four
 weeks took the highest rates, followed by the residents who bought instant
coffee
 in
last
 4 weeks and end up with the
resident
 who went to a cafe for
coffee
 or
tea
 in
last
Suggestion
the last four weeks
four
 weeks.
To begin
 with, around 65 % of the
resident
 in Melbourne
city
 bought fresh
coffee
 in the
last
four
 weeks and it took the highest rates of all the
city
 at the same time.
Likewise
, the people that bought instant
coffee
 in
last
 4 weeks and the
resident
 who went to a cafe for
coffee
 or
tea
 in
last
Suggestion
the last four weeks
four
 weeks in Melbourne
city
 accounted for about 50% and up to 40% of the
resident
.
However
, the
resident
 who bought instant
coffee
 in
last 4 weeks
Suggestion
the last 4 weeks
 in Hobart made up almost 55% and became the highest-rated of all the
city
Suggestion
cities
 for that time period, while the lowest rate for the exact time is for the Sydney
resident
 at about 40% of them.
Finally
, the
city
 people who with the
resident
 who went to a cafe for
coffee
 or
tea
 in
last
Suggestion
the last four weeks
four
 weeks took the biggest part of the
resident
 in Sydney and the lowest part in Brisbane which about 45 % and 35 % of the residents.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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