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The chart illustrates the survey results of the
city
resident
in buying and consuming
coffee
and
tea
in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. Overall, the residents who bought fresh
coffee
in the
last
four
weeks took the highest rates, followed by the residents who bought instant
coffee
in
last
4 weeks and end up with the
resident
who went to a cafe for
coffee
or
tea
in
last
Suggestion
the last four weeks
four
weeks.
To begin
with, around 65 % of the
resident
in Melbourne
city
bought fresh
coffee
in the
last
four
weeks and it took the highest rates of all the
city
at the same time.
Likewise
, the people that bought instant
coffee
in
last
4 weeks and the
resident
who went to a cafe for
coffee
or
tea
in
last
Suggestion
the last four weeks
four
weeks in Melbourne
city
accounted for about 50% and up to 40% of the
resident
.
However
, the
resident
who bought instant
coffee
in
last 4 weeks
Suggestion
the last 4 weeks
in Hobart made up almost 55% and became the highest-rated of all the
city
Suggestion
cities
for that time period, while the lowest rate for the exact time is for the Sydney
resident
at about 40% of them.
Finally
, the
city
people who with the
resident
who went to a cafe for
coffee
or
tea
in
last
Suggestion
the last four weeks
four
weeks took the biggest part of the
resident
in Sydney and the lowest part in Brisbane which about 45 % and 35 % of the residents.
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