Some people think that money spent on space exploration is a waste and could be better used to fund other urgent problems in society.

Many people believe that there is no point in spending a huge amount of

money

on space exploration and it could be better used for devoting

money

to fund other urgent problems in society. From my

personal personal

concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality

personal

perspective,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

wholly agree that people should use

money

to spare for some

importunate

of great significance or value

important

issues afterward.

Firstly

, it is widely supposed that space exploration is a long

run which

Accept comma addition

run, which

promise taking

amount

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the amount

of massive

money

and effort in order to dig into a mass of mysterious universe and investigate a perfect plant outside the earth that human can live in

.

Accept space

.

However

, after

exporing

inquire into

exploring

a big number of planets, mankind still

stucks

caught or fixed

stuck

sticks

stocks

in finding out a planet which

have

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has

advantagous

the quality of having a superior or more favorable position

advantages

elements to

mantain

keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"

maintain

mention

mountain

life.

Therefore

,

instead

of investing

to

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in

the ideas that have no future, why don’t we spend

money

saving the earth and protecting our own society? I strongly believe that if people stop investing a lot of

money

in exploring

universe

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the universe

to give cash for funding, our community will become better and better thanks to the supplements from governments and NGO to charity funds. Children will be able to have the

oppotunity

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunity

to

accesss

the right to enter

access

into a high-quality education. People in poor countries would no longer suffer from famine. Governments always have

enomous

extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree

enormous

soures

similar things placed in order or happening one after another

series

sours

of reserved funds for helping people in disaster areas due to social funds

.

Accept space

.

In summary, many people prone to the idea that

money

should be given to government’s fund

instead

of investing

on

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in

space exploration. In my opinion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

agree with

this

idea as mankind

need

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needs

to deal with a range of impending issues before thinking about the others