Some people think that companies and individuals ,rather than the government ,should pay for cleaning up the pollution they produced. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays resolving
pollution
is a public focus.
However
, whether
government
or
companys
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the companies
companies
company
and individuals spend
money
on
this
is a controversial issue. People should be responsible for
pollution
, but
government
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the government
should make full use of
these
denotes a person or thing
this
money
to eliminate
pollution
. It is undeniable that
companys
an institution created to conduct business
companies
or individuals should spend
money
on dealing with
pollution
caused by themselves. In fact,
pollution
is not
fault
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the fault
a fault
of
government but
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the government, but
the government but
human-made. In order to pursue a maximum profit, a company may use some fossil fuel to produce goods and
then
discharge some pollutants to nature, which is detrimental for
environment
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the environment
.
Moreover
, people whose environmental friendly awareness is lower are likely to drive car to travel too frequently or drop rubbish everywhere. These
companys
an institution created to conduct business
companies
or people should be responsible for these environmental problems. There is another reason why
government
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the government
do not need
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does not need
to take responsibility for
pollution
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the pollution
.
Government
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The government
has lots of necessary things to do.
For example
, with increasing population aging and people's desire for welfare,
government
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the government
are
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is
in desperate need of investment in these areas.
However
,
government
should play
a
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an
essential role in solving
pollution
. To be specific,
government
imposes high taxes and fine on people whose
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
is harmful
for
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to
environment
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the environment
.
Then
these
money
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monies
moneys
can be allocated to
pollution
treatment. The reason why taking
this
measure is that social problems solved by
government
is
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are
more effective
.
Accept space
.
Besides
this
, if people who should pay for
pollution
deal with
pollution
by themselves, they
can not
can not
cannot
make enough efforts to do that in order to maximize their own interests In conclusion, people should pay for the cost caused by themselves
as a result
of their own faults and inadequate
money
of
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by
government
.
Accept space
.
In addition
,
government
can be a substitute for payers to utilize
these
denotes a person or thing
this
money
in a reasonable way.
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