Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Purchasing things online like air tickets and groceries is
becomming
increasingly common. It has many according with custom or propriety
becoming
benefits but
there are some disadvantages. I will consider both sides of the argument and give my opinion.
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benefits, but
To begin
with, online shopping is convenient We can buy anything online with just a few clicks. Online shopping gives us opportunity
to shop anytime anywhere. There are no lines to wait. Suggestion
the opportunity
an opportunity
For example
, I couldn’t go out during MCO, so I bought the things I needed on the internet.
In addition
, we can buy things with cheaper price compare to off-line store. Online sellers offer various coupons or points for their regular customers. For instance
, I signed up for a new online shop and got a lot of coupons and bought things cheaply.
Furthermore
, online shopping has unlimited choices. We can find almost anybrand
of item we are looking for online. Suggestion
any brand
Also
prices and features are often compared enabling customers to choose the right products that they need. But there are some drawbacks too.
Firstly
, shipping probems
or delays may occur during delivery. The products may not arrive the day I needed them so, we can’t receive at on time. a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
Also
, we will not get the products on holiday. For example
, it took a long time to receive my product during MCO period.
Secondly we
can be swindled from Accept comma addition
Secondly, we
unknown seller
. We didn’t see in person. So, we don’t know what we are getting exactly. Suggestion
unknown sellers
an unknown seller
Similary we
order Accept comma addition
Similarly, we
Similarly we
something but
we can receive something else.
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something, but
Lastly
, we can’t touch and try the product. When we get a pro
-duct
, the Suggestion
Duct
color
of the product or the size of the clothes can be different. a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
For instance
, when i
got the clothes from online shopping, it was not the refers to the speaker or writer
I
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
i
thought.
Online shopping has many advantages refers to the speaker or writer
I
such
as convenience, low price, wide choice and disadvantages such
as shipping problem, cheating. However
, delierery
problems and cheating are rare and these days, the act of delivering or distributing something (as goods or mail)
delivery
saftey
transactions are guaranteed. In my opinion, the advantages of online shopping outweigh disadvantages.the state of being certain that adverse effects will not be caused by some agent under defined conditions
safety
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