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Some people believe that it is good to share as much info as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other, believe that some information in too important or valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give opinion

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Knowledge is a power. Freedom of speech is very crucial and dominant in our society. Some people think it is beneficial to share new researches freely,
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, some people think there must be security and data protection on each piece of
information
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. I believe restrictions must be imposed on
basis
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the basis
 of the
information
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 category. Sharing current and valid
information
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 can play a vital role in new researches and developments. Nowadays, researchers have to work very hard to gather relevant and valid details to structure their developments. In
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 case, if the
information
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 would be freely available it would be convenient for them to work without any hustle and charges.
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, as
uptill
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up till
 now there is no vaccine has been diagnosed and developed to cure Corona Virus. If the
information
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 regarding the facts and experiments
have shared
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has shared
 freely among each other it is a possibility to create its vaccine early.
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,
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 approach can
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 be misused and create
devastating situation
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a devastating situation
 in a society.
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, in case of Atomic and nuclear physics area if the
information
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 is easily available, people can try
experiments
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experimenting
 by their own which can cause dire consequences.
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, an authentication or validation process must be
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implemented
 before to access any sort of
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 especially from an internet.
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 process regulates a user to provide purpose to access
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 sensitive
information
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 In conclusion, I would say restriction based on type of
information
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 must be in place before to access or share. As
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 procedure, would regulate people to handle the knowledge carefully and prevent them to data mishandling.
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