Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day and in their free time and have a health problem as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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Indeed,

exercise

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is necessary for a healthy

body

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and a sound mind. But, nowadays some people do not consider its value in their daily

life

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routine. Specially working class who spent most of their

time

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offices

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offices, therefore

therefore

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they cannot manage to spare some

time

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for

exercise

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or any other physical activity.

As a result

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dire health consequences

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the dire health consequences

can affect the

body

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longer

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the long

run. There can be many reasons of not having an

exercise

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daily basis but

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a daily basis, but

a daily basis but

it has been noticed that people who have busy routine and spent most of their

time

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in offices they normally not manage to go for

exercise

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. Having a busy schedule is not only a reason for

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. Staying and work continuously

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In front

of computers make the

body

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and mind

tierd

depleted of strength or energy

tired

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this

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work culture makes a person lazy and habitual of

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routine.

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continuous

routine

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routine, then becomes

routine then becomes

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become living culture and people never think to get

involve

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involved

in any kind of physical activity or do

exercise

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even on weekends or during holidays. Not having any physical activity makes a

body

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dull and bulky. To eradicate

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problem it

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problem, it

is recommended to schedule your day with a proper timetable.

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, we always spare our

time

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for lunch, dinner and breakfast.

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, there must be some specific

time

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in a day for

exercise

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too. Early morning walk before to start a day or after the dinner can be

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considered

as a start.

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, gyms can

also

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be helpful to motivate a person

for

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exercise

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. Instructors play a great role to push a person to achieve

such

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healthy routine.

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, as in gyms, an individual is liable to follow

timngs

the time when something happens

timings

which allow them to schedule their

life

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and routine in

timely manner

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a timely manner

. In conclusion,

refers to the speaker or writer

would say

exercise

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should be a part of everyday routine. It remains a mind and

body

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fresh.

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Thus everyone

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Thus, everyone

should develop their

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life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

such

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a way that promotes a healthy

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life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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325 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Time constraints
Sedentary lifestyle
Passive leisure activities
Workplace wellness programs
Active commuting
Subsidized
Public awareness
Health benefits
Incentivizing
Accessible public spaces

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Difference between countries are becoming less evident. Nowadays, people are watching the same films, fashion, brands, advetisements and TV channels. To what extent do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their subjects, other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for all qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own view.