Does Internet need to be controlled by the government?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
With the evolution of
internet
Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
world has become the global village where everyone has
accessibility
Suggestion
access
to connect things via online.
This
Linking Words
make
Suggestion
makes
our lives so easy and quick but
also
Linking Words
a cause of growth in
cyber-crimes
crime committed using a computer and the internet to steal a person's identity or sell contraband or stalk victims or disrupt operations with malevolent programs
cybercrime
as well. In my opinion, with
this
Linking Words
vast accessibility of
Use synonyms
internet
Suggestion
the internet
everywhere, the
government
Use synonyms
authorities must impose monitoring controls on
internet
Use synonyms
usage
Use synonyms
in order to eradicate
cyber-crimes
crime committed using a computer and the internet to steal a person's identity or sell contraband or stalk victims or disrupt operations with malevolent programs
cybercrimes
cybercrimes'
cybercrime
.
However
Linking Words
, it is difficult to impose monitoring controls on
such
Linking Words
a huge level as it
require
Suggestion
requires
a large amount of infrastructure and technical resources.
Therefore
Linking Words
,
government
Use synonyms
authorities must have
such
Linking Words
well-defined strategies to take serious action upon
cyber-crimes
crime committed using a computer and the internet to steal a person's identity or sell contraband or stalk victims or disrupt operations with malevolent programs
cybercrimes
cybercrime
cybercrimes'
for example
Linking Words
fraud during
online transaction
Suggestion
online transactions
an online transaction
, fraud by fake company identities. These actions will discourage people to involve in
such
Linking Words
activities. For
this
Linking Words
purpose, there must a separate team/department by
government
Use synonyms
officials to evaluate, confirm and diagnose
such
Linking Words
cases with valid proofs and authenticity.
On the other hand
Linking Words
,
this
Linking Words
not only the
responsibility
Use synonyms
of
government
Use synonyms
only to control inter
this
Linking Words
must be controlled individually as well.
For
Linking Words
example as
Accept comma addition
example, as
a parent, it is the
responsibility
Use synonyms
to keep an eye on the activities of
offspring
Suggestion
the offspring
either on which sites they spent their time.
Moreover
Linking Words
, it is our
responsibility
Use synonyms
to aware our colleagues, family and friends as well about the dire consequences of illegal
usage
Use synonyms
of
Use synonyms
internet
Suggestion
the internet
or to involve in
such
Linking Words
activities. In conclusion, it is the
responsibility
Use synonyms
of
government
Use synonyms
to not only implement controls over the
internet
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
usage but
Accept comma addition
usage, but
also
Linking Words
educate users about
effective
Suggestion
the effective internet usage
internet
Use synonyms
usage
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by Silah on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: