Some people claim that many things children learn at school have actually wasted their time. Other people argue that everything taught at school is useful in the future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Whether all of
things
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the things
taught by teachers at
school
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is
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are
valuable or not is a controversial issue. In my opinion, most of
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knowledge
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the knowledge
which students acquire in their academic career is beneficial to them. The argument that many
knowledge
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taught by teachers are useless is plausible. There is no denying that some courses have little practical value.
For example
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, elementary politics and history are two compulsory courses during learning at
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, but some students think
these
denotes a person or thing
this
knowledge
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are
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is
so boring that they do not focus on them.
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,
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these students are less likely to know how to apply them. Another evidence to support the argument is that students must learn some basic lessons
such
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as math
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,
foreign language and computer technology.
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these things are important for students' career in the future, students do not need to learn them deeply and systematically.
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it is enough for children to attain
nearly intermediate level
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nearly intermediate levels
a nearly intermediate level
in terms of general
knowledge
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. To be specific, there is no need that most of students learn
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a hard lump produced by the concretion of mineral salts; found in hollow organs or ducts of the body
calculus
,
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designating or involving an equation whose terms are of the first degree
linear
algebra in the university.
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, some people think that all kinds of things learning at
school
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are valuable.
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statement is right to some extent.
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, the
school
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is a place where people get necessary
knowledge
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qualified for their jobs. If a person
want
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wants
to be
a
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an
entrepreneur
,
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,
he need to take
a
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an
MBA program or something relevant to management and corporate finance.
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, students can be moral and distinguish right from wrong through some relevant compulsory courses. It is obvious that
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statement exaggerate the fact. Not anything learned at
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can students benefit from. In conclusion, people can learn ethics and necessary skills
for
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to
work when they are students.
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, some courses are lack of practice and less necessary.
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