Some people claim that many things children learn at school have actually wasted their time. Other people argue that everything taught at school is useful in the future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Whether all of

things

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the things

taught by teachers at

school

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are

valuable or not is a controversial issue. In my opinion, most of

knowledge

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the knowledge

which students acquire in their academic career is beneficial to them. The argument that many

knowledge

taught by teachers are useless is plausible. There is no denying that some courses have little practical value.

For example

, elementary politics and history are two compulsory courses during learning at

school

, but some students think

these

denotes a person or thing

this

knowledge

are

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so boring that they do not focus on them.

Furthermore

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these students are less likely to know how to apply them. Another evidence to support the argument is that students must learn some basic lessons

such

as math

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foreign language and computer technology.

Although

these things are important for students' career in the future, students do not need to learn them deeply and systematically.

In other words

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it is enough for children to attain

nearly intermediate level

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nearly intermediate levels

a nearly intermediate level

in terms of general

knowledge

. To be specific, there is no need that most of students learn

calcus

a hard lump produced by the concretion of mineral salts; found in hollow organs or ducts of the body

calculus

liner

designating or involving an equation whose terms are of the first degree

linear

algebra in the university.

However

, some people think that all kinds of things learning at

school

are valuable.

This

statement is right to some extent.

Firstly

, the

school

is a place where people get necessary

knowledge

qualified for their jobs. If a person

want

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wants

to be

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entrepreneur

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he need to take

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MBA program or something relevant to management and corporate finance.

Secondly

, students can be moral and distinguish right from wrong through some relevant compulsory courses. It is obvious that

this

statement exaggerate the fact. Not anything learned at

school

can students benefit from. In conclusion, people can learn ethics and necessary skills

for

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work when they are students.

However

, some courses are lack of practice and less necessary.

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Some people claim that many things children learn at school have actually wasted their time. Other people argue that everything taught at school is useful in the future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so there is logic that men and women should share the housework tasks equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that humans are damaging seriously the environment. what are the causes? what should people do to solve this peoblem?

Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

More and more people are using a lot of online languages translation apps. Are there more advantages or more disadvantages of such services.

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this?Do you think it is a positive or negative development?